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How to write perfect Masters in Finance essay

 

Did you know

  • Avg. salary of Masters in Finance candidates 3 years post-graduation is 90,000$+
  • Starting salaries range from 60,000- 75000$.
  • 60%+ of applicants end up in financial services while 20%+ go on to consulting roles.

In fact, some of the most popular domains MiF applicants go into are Asset Management, Equity Research, and M&A.

 

If all these interests you and you desire to work in companies such as Bain, Blackrock, HSBC, Goldman Sachs or JP Morgan, the Masters in Finance is the degree for you

The Masters in Finance is specifically designed to get students well versed with basic and advanced financial concepts, gain relevant experience and equip them with the skill set needed to traverse the increasingly international financial waters today.

90%+ applicants from the top M.Fin schools find a job within 3 months of graduation, while 65%+ tend to find one before graduation.

Here are some things which allow the M.Fin to do so

  1. A range of core courses such as Financial Markets Microstructure, Corporate Analysis & Valuation; and electives such as Behavioral Strategy, FX Derivatives Trading, specially designed to give you a concrete knowledge about the financial world.
  2. A lot of schools offer specializations or certifications to help you build a certain expertise, for example Corporate Investment Banking, Financial Markets, Digital Entrepreneurship certification,  Mergers & Acquisitions certification.
  3. Immense exposure and a strong international profile built by experiences ranging from studying for 15 weeks in Paris & another 15 in London to applying knowledge to a real life case in Ghana.
  4. Strong career service departments give you access to regular expert talks, career fairs, and trips to financial centers to develop your understanding of markets.
  5. A network of finance professionals a thousand strong spanning across the globe, ready to provide you the mentoring and connections needed to move ahead in this industry.

Usually 90%+ applicants from the top M.Fin schools find a job with in 3 months of graduation, while 65%+ tend to find one before graduation.

 

Knowing how tough and competitive the financial world is these stats are pretty good.

Here are some companies recruiting from some of the top 5 M.fin schools

Investment Banks: Deutsche Banks, Morgan Stanley, UBS, JP Morgan

Private Banking: UBS, Credit Suisse, Lombard Odier, Citigroup.

Consulting Firms: MC Kinsey, BCG, AT Kearny, E&Y, KPMG, PWC, Deloitte

Private Equity: Cinven, Permira, 3i, Neuberger Berman, Bridgepoint

Corporations: BP, Shell, GE, IBM, Microsoft, L’Oreal

 

 

Further, the roles you can expect are the following

  • Trading/Sales/Structuring
  • Financial Analysis/Firm Valuation/Transaction Services
  • Project/Structured Financing
  • Risk Management/Control
  • Portfolio/Asset Management
  • M&A/Consulting
  • Equity/Debt Capital Market
  • Private Equity
  • Project Management

 

See yourself in these shoes? Then the M.Fin is for you.

 

That said getting into a good M.Fin school is not a piece of cake.

The competition is intense with 1000's of applicants applying for the same odd 60-100 seats.

With a heavy weightage of 30% on the application essays, LOR and Resume, you cannot afford to take them lightly.

Couple with that the strong work profiles and high GMAT scores most of these applicants and you will realise that the competition is intense.

Just a high GMAT and some work experience is not enough, you need to make the school realise

  • Why you want to pursue this particular degree?
  • How will you be a good fit for the program?
  • What experiences have made you realise your motivation for finance?(Especially true if you are not from a finance background)
  • What are your short term goals, do you have clarity towards the same?

 

A good Masters in Finance Essay answers these questions and much more.

With a heavy weightage of 30% on the application essays, LOR and Resume, you cannot afford to take them lightly.

 

Further, each school has a different take on the admission essays and a specific format.

This may be 

The three 600 word IE M.Fin essay

OR

The 1500 word SOP of LSE MSc Finance

OR

The eight 1000 characters essays of the HEC Paris M.Fin

 

Most of these essays are very specific and cover much more than just Why M.Fin hence you need be aware of what they are asking want and what the school itself is seeking.

 

So how do I write a great Masters in Finance Essay?

Here are some general pointers to get you started.

  • What motivates you?

Talk about what makes you interested in finance. What sparks your interest? How the possibilities of varied fields make you excited?

  • What led you to this point?

Talk about a previous project or work experience you’ve had that is relevant to finance. Passion and interest are great, but if you can show that you’ve actually done something about them already, that is even more powerful.

Based on what you know of finance, what kinds of activities, positions, and accomplishments do you have under your belt that can show that you’d do well in finance?

Experiences are powerful and if used properly can make a generic essay very personalized

  • What are your goals, how will the degree help you get

Talk about what you hope to accomplish as an international student with a finance degree. Where do you see yourself just after graduating? Are you particularly drawn to one part of the financial sector or another? What do you hope to accomplish with your degree and why? How does it tie in with your long term goals?

  • Backup with examples! Show, don’t tell – use metrics and concrete numbers where possible.

Give specific examples of what you have done in the past, help the ad com see your passion. Your experiences will be your major differentiating points.

 

 Showcase specific skills if any and proficiency in working with numbers can be an added advantage.

These pointers though general sum up some main areas which every essay should contain.

But it's just the tip of the iceberg, and one needs to deeply introspect on each and every element, and as mentioned earlier back everything up with relevant experiences.

With the weight age given to essays, you need to ensure you give it nothing but the best

Our team of consultants will help you brainstorm & help discover things that you did not even consider to be important.

To make your job easier and help you present the best step forward we offer a comprehensive Masters in Finance Essay Editing service.

 

Our M.Fin Essay Editing Service

 

Our team of consultants will help you brainstorm & help discover things that you did not even consider to be important.

Often the overlooked things can make an enormous impact on your essays.

Additionally its not just enough to add each and every experience you have had, you need in mind a few things

  1. There is proper flow between the specific points, and its engaging enough to keep the reader interested….No one likes to read through a 1000 word long boring block of text
  2. There are no redundancies in your essays, one needs to have a strategic outlook, understand what are his/her main differentiating points and highlight them accordingly in the essays
  3. The different application sub-parts support the application. The LORs, the resume should back up and support the image you present in the essays. Again redundancies should be avoided
  4. Highlights your interest in Finance while backing it up with due experiences.

Though it may sound intimidating, with a sound strategy you should easily be able to win maximum points in the application part.

 

We at MiM-Essay.com believe that every student has an amazing story to tell, he or she just needs that extra push to discover it!

Rather than leaving the essay to chance, you can opt for our MiM Essay Editing service, and we guarantee you that your application quality will increase many fold.

 

 Here are what some of our clients say after taking up our services

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My experience with MiM was extremely positive throughout the entire application process. Right from the very beginning, I received a lot of quality attention, which not only enabled me to optimally prepare my application package, but also to remain confident throughout the process. MiM team was readily available, very flexible, and above all tremendously supportive. With their help, I got into all the finance programs that I have applied to - Bocconi, HSG, and UZH. They do not provide cookie-cutter advice, instead, the team helped me to tailor LOM to my profile and highlight areas that would be unique to me. In short, I doubt that without MiM I would have managed to stand out the way I did.

Karolis St Gallen’17 (MBF) and Bocconi’17 (MiF)

 

My experience with MiM-Essay was great. Their services were crucial in my application. Indeed, since they are all former MiM students that faced the application process, they know what are the concerns that applicants face. I think that the best part of the service is its customization. They understood my profile and figured out which are my strengths and weaknesses, providing me the best support. Furthermore, another important advantage of their service is the multiple edits of the CV/SOP, in which MiM essays focus on reaching the perfection thought high attention to detail.

I would absolutely recommend MiM-Essays to everyone is interested in applying to a master degree: not only to the students interested in the MiM but also to the ones interested in a specialized master.

Edoardo Imperial College'17 (MSc in Finance) & IE'17 (MiF)

 

It was such a great experience of working with MiM-Essay team because I achieved what I wanted in the first place; I did not need to go for the second-priority or whatsoever. My consultant possesses great qualities to be an editor. He always supported me with positive energy that helped alleviate some unnecessary anxieties while we were waiting for the results of applications.

I liked the accessibility of my editor the most. He basically took charge of my application from A to Z, which means he was well aware of my strength and weakness, so he could provide tailored services to me. In this way, he could help me elicit my full potentials that should be included in the application.

His invaluable feedbacks on my CV, his holistic editing services on my drafts, and insightful tips on every process of the applications played a pivotal role in enhancing the quality of my application.

Bill LBS MFA'16

How does the MiM Essay Editing Service work?

Step 1: The Initial Counselling

 

Which schools can be targeted with my profile? How many schools should I target? 

Will these schools be a good fit for me?  How can your services help me?

These are just a few of the questions we help tackle during our initial counseling section.

By pairing you with one of our consultants, we give you one on one attention and help resolve all queries you may have.

We help you figure out your unique strengths, the glaring weaknesses and brief you on how exactly we can help you.

Step 2: The Brain Storming Session

 

A consultant can't really help you if he does not have a good understanding of your profile.

Hence our first official Skype call is an hour long brain storming session where we dig into "the why" behind every life step of yours.

From schooling to college life, right up to your current work experience, we dig into each part, cross-questioning you on why you took those particular steps.

Why this particular activity? What did you learn while doing it? How did it help you grow?

These are just some of the questions which will help us dig deep into your profile, and allow us to understand what makes you unique.

Post the session we will send you a detailed analysis sheet which will be useful in selecting experiences to include in school specific essays in future sessions.

 

The Brain Storming Session is designed to give us an understanding of your motivations and aspirations, knowing which we can help you shortlist prospective schools and decide on your final targets. Hence it is not necessary to have a final list of schools before you start working with us.

 

Step 3: Essay Content Analysis

 

The next step would be scheduling Skype calls to discuss your essays.

Here is what we would do:

  • Analyze each essay question, and help you understand what the school wants
  • Dig into your profile and highlight activities which can be used to make a positive impression
  • Help you figure out the content and structure of the essay
  • Give you tips on how the readability and flow of the essay can be improved
  • Make sure that every line is personalized and is unique to your profile

Notes would be taken during the call, and a recording of the call would be sent to you as well.

At the end of the call, you will have the essay game plan, & would be more than ready to work on your first draft.

Step 4: Analysing Sample Essays

 

To prepare you better for writing your first draft, we’ll send you sample essays of former successful applicants.

This will allow you to understand how past applicants framed their experiences in the concise format required by the essay questions, and give you some ideas on how you can do the same.

With 2 different sample essays, you will be confident that the approach you are taking has been tried and tested.

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Step 5: Proof Reading and Comprehensive Edits

 

Once you have created your first draft and have sent it to us for review, we will

  • Edit the content, making sure there are no abrupt breaks or missing gaps in the story line
  • Add suggestions for improvement
  • Proofread the essay for any grammatical mistakes

Be ready to have your initial draft ribbed with red and green comments; essays take several edits to hone, and we will make sure yours are perfect.

What will follow is an exchange of five to & fro emails, with successive drafts, each one improving upon your essays until you are assured that the essay you have is the best possible.


This process has been tried and tested by 100’s of our past clients, and we have a splendid 92% success rate with the same.

So if you are ready to take your application essays to the next level, and improve your chances of gaining an admit exponentially, Sign up with us.

Also, want insights into how our service helped people in the past?

Check out what our clients have to say.

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